根据中文大意和英文提示词语,写出意思连贯、符合逻辑的短文。所给英文提示词语仅供选 用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
上学期间,学校的某些场所一定给你留下了美好的记忆,如教室、阅览室、操场等。某英文报 纸正以“My Favorite Place at School”为题征文,请你投稿。描述一个你最喜欢的地方,并请说明原因。
提示词语:classroom,reading-room,playground
注意:
- 词数:100 左右;
- 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
下面是一个学生的习作,亮点丰富,“过渡词”用得尤其好,使得全文连贯自然,你可以在背诵 过程中反复体会。
My Favorite Place at School
With the development of science and technology, we modern individuals all need life-long reading;as a result,the library has become my favorite place at school.
As for the reasons, reading books in the library can make me feel happy and I can learn a lot from it. For example,I am crazy about storybooks,considering that they are not only meaningful but also interesting.Besides,I like the quietness there,which makes me calm and comfortable.
All in all,the library is my favorite place at school and I would like to stay there forever.
伴随着发展/科学与技术的,我们当代人都需要终身阅读;因此,这个图书馆已经变成我 最喜欢的地方/在学校。
至于理由呢,读书/在这个图书馆/可以让我感觉幸福/而且我能学到很多/从它里面。例 如,我是疯狂的/关于读故事书,因为他们是既有意义又有趣。此外,我喜欢这个安静/那儿 的,这件事让我冷静和舒服。
总而言之,这个图书馆是我最喜欢的地方/在学校/而且我愿意/去待在那里/永远。
亮点积累一
With the development of science and technology,…伴随着科学与技术的发展, …… (高级介词短语,用来写各种社会话题、经济话题)
we modern individuals 我们当代的个人 (高级同位语用法,modern individuals 作 为 we 的同位语)
life-long reading 终身阅读 (超级时尚概念)
..;as a result,….因此 … … ("白银裤衩句型",用在你已经造出的句子之后进行补充说明,有助于增加内容量和语 法复杂度,相当于 so)
As for the reasons,…至于理由呢, …… (高级过渡词,用来引出原因)
For example,…例如, …… (常用过渡词,用来引出例子)
I am crazy about sth./doing sth.我为 … … 而疯狂 (高级表达方式,相当于 I like.….)
..,considering that…因为 … … (“白银裤衩句型”,用在你已经造出的句子之后进行补充说明,有助于增加内容量和语 法复杂度,相当于 because)
not only meaningful but also interesting 既有意义又有趣 (万能套话,广泛用来修饰各种好东西、好事情)
…one thing…。Besides, … 此 外 … … (常用过渡词) (一共两件事)
….which…这件事 … … (“白银裤衩句型”,用在你已经造出的句子之后进行补充说明,有助于增加内容量和语 法复杂度,表示对上一句的评价)
All in all,…总而言之 (常用过渡词,用来做总结)
跑题作文一(写了多个地方,注意题目要求只写一个地方!)
先打草稿,再修改修饰,再抄写到卷面上。
It has been several years since I graduated from high school; however, some places of the school have left me with unforgettable memories.
First and foremost, there is no doubt that the classroom was so clean and bright that we high school students could study seriously and efficiently. Additionally, it's obvious that the reading-room was helpful, in that these books placed there could broaden our horizons and cultivate our interests. Last but certainly not least, no one can deny the playground was a lovely, entertaining place, where we could run, play basketball, and so on, which are beneficial for our physical and mental health.
Never could I forget these places!

注意点,错误点:
- 从高中毕业,写 I graduated from high school;不用在 high school 前加 the;
- 给某人留下短语:leave sb. with sh。注意加介词 with.
- unforgettable,难忘的,get 双写 t,再加 -able
- 回忆 memories 是可数名词
- classroom 教师,连着写
- helpful,full 只用写一个
l!! - and so on 前面要加逗号!he like orange, apple, and so on.
- be beneficial for 对……有益。bene,be+be,两个 e!
扩展
- 美好的回忆
- happy memories
- beautiful memories
- fantastic memories